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【如果或许应该】Application essay to Princeton  

MY LIFE AND THREE QUOTES

 It is not always easy to express some deep feelings inside me. But when I come across such sentences, my heart immediately recognizes them.

To the world you may mean one person; but to one person you may mean the world. 

-anonymous

I was raised in a small neighborhood, attended a small primary school where I was the centre of all attention. I enjoyed special treatment and attention from adults and peers. However changes have taken place over the years. I have come a long way from the small school. Slowly I started to feel the pressure of unimportance and anonymity in a crowd. Inside me there are doubts about how well I can perform, about what people think of me. I have always wanted to make a difference; I have always wanted to matter. Then this quote came to my rescue. The world is too complicated and chaotic; too many things are beyond my control. But I can do my small part to make life happier for at least some people. I know my existence will then mean something to these people. To have a fruitful life I do not need to change the world, I do not have to be a president to make a difference. I am important to the disabled lady I teach in a Home, I am important to the beneficiaries of charities which I help to raise fund for. I am important to the lost child I help to find home. My mere presence is important to my family and my friends.

 Every child is a reminder that God has not lost hope in men. - Tagore

 I have always loved children. Once a child, I was lucky to enjoy my green years unfettered by hunger, violence or disease. Not everyone is as fortunate. How could we watch a precious symbol of hope perish in despair, when there is tremendous potential and future lying in front of this child? It is my wish to pursue a career related to child development, to protect them from any harm, to help them and to equip them with life skills.

 Human life occurs only once, and the reason we cannot determine which of our decisions are good is that we can make only one decision. We are not granted a second life in which to compare various decisions. - Milan Kundera

 I could not help but praise his ingenuity! Milan Kundera’s books are full of such subtle but philosophical observations of life. This quote means the most to me because it makes me realize that there is no point in regretting decisions. Sometimes I look back at my decisions to come to Singapore, to transfer schools, I do have sentiments. But how do I know if I would be better off with another choice? I know the answer is belief. To believe in myself and the decisions I make, to strive on the road I choose and to make the best out of what I have.

do leave me some comments after you read it...



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苏樱发表于10/22/2004 2:15:42 PM | View blogs in this category:如果或许应该

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haha..i like your last quote too..its a nice reassurance..to have faith in your decisions and the choices you make..
Hmmm..don't think you should be dissatisfied..essays that convey what you really feel are enjoyable..for I can sense the sincerity and passion..=)

fuyee @ 10/24/2004 10:49:33 PM

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Actually, the first quote is the one that provokes most number of response from my readers.I guess everybody has this kind of feeling.

苏樱 @ 10/24/2004 3:11:09 AM

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Truth to be told, I am really very very dissatisified with this essay...

苏樱 @ 10/23/2004 7:27:16 PM

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Personally I'm not satisfied with this essay, but with the 500word limit, I don't know how to put everything together. To write a story it would require much more words! But in this analytic style, I violate the rule of "show, not tell'.It is just so hard...

苏樱 @ 10/23/2004 7:26:07 PM

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我可是一篇ps都没写过的人,所以不好作什么评论。不过对于最后一个深有同感,至少我一直是这么想的。

无名氏 @ 10/22/2004 11:01:16 PM

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Haha..first time I'm writing a comment here..I find that all the essays are written from the heart..full of passion..job well done..=)

fuyee @ 10/22/2004 10:24:08 PM

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第一个有点精神胜利法的感觉……并且,有点普通……不需要写那么长吧?不喜欢……

第二个……不知道你要报的专业是啥……不过,我对于原话的理解,以及我对于你的评论的理解好像搭不上边……我是把原话理解为是孩子的天真无邪让人们感受到上帝并没有放弃在人间传播真善美之类的……不明白你如何能够将其联系到儿童保护……

第三个……对……相信……但是……我也可以相信我以前做错了吧?

Wuvist @ 10/22/2004 6:03:28 PM

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The language is still a bit colloquial. It will be something quite nice to read if you refine it in a more intellectual way.. but anyway, this is just my opinions...

Rex @ 10/22/2004 5:08:29 PM

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just now me.

carrot @ 10/22/2004 3:11:30 PM

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well done job

无名氏 @ 10/22/2004 3:11:06 PM

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I dunno how one should write application essay cos i never applied for overseas U.

But may your wish come true! =)

foxy @ 10/22/2004 2:53:27 PM

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